Giovanni Jaramillo wrote:
Suggestion of addition of rule to either
- Section 7 -- CSCC SOLO REGIONAL CHAMPIONSIHP POINTS AND AWARDS or
- Section 9 -- SOLO COMMITTEE ADMINISTRATIVE PROCEDURES
(7.1.2)/(9.1.3) POINTS CARD RENEWAL
: After October 1st Points card number(s) may be renewed. Points cards expire at the end of the calendar year (12/31/xxxx). Renewal of a points card for the following year will be announced on the 1st of October of the current year. If the points card is not renewed by the end of the current year, that number will become available to anyone and is not reserved for the previous card holder. At that point the number will be available on a "first-come, first-served" basis, with the exception of the protected number range: 1-199. Those numbers are assigned at the discretion of the Solo Membership Chairman.
This is to become effective for year 2011.
Gio, thanks for the work. May I suggest a variation a bit less wordy:
7.1.2)/(9.1.3) POINTS CARD RENEWAL
: Points cards may be renewed after Oct. 1st. Points card number(s) must be renewed by the end of the calendar year, or they will expire. Expired number(s) are available on a "first-come, first-served" basis, with the exception of numbers: 1-199, assigned at the discretion of the Solo Membership Chairman.
Reasons for changes :
"(12/31/xxxx), Redundant, what other definition of a calender year would there be?
Sentence including "announced on the 1st of October" Do we need a rule that states when future announcement will be made? Is there a benefit or consequence if were off a day / week or so?
End of second sentence beginning of third sentence - Redundant
Last portion just wordy... shortens it up.